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This is the first cut from my production,

obviously there is still a lot of work to do.

Marked against the A-Level Criteria by our teacher, I received information about final changes which need to occur very soon:

CONSTRUCTION CRITERIA	LEVEL	COMMENT
Holding shot steady	2	Phone goes out of focus(other shots too) Try to avoid cutting on moving shots
Framing a shot	2	This is generally OK.
Appropriate material for task	2	No indication of who the character is – doesn’t really set up a narrative
Selecting mise en scene (colour, lighting, props, setting)	2	Only 1 location- this limits grade. You need to show that you have used costume, lighting etc for effect
Editing for meaning		Builds up strong suggesting crime planning.
Varied shot transitions and post production effects	2	Lots of variety of cuts/ mixes but no other post-production techniques.
Use of sound	2	Ambient sound OK but needs another layer.
Using titles	1	Still don’t like the title- and it needs to come at the end. Other titles needed.